To find some mistake

问题描述:

To find some mistake
I had received a shawl form Sue as a gift for our customers this morning.
我在SUE处领取了一条准备送给客户的丝巾.
看英语是否正确~提些建议哈.
Hey ,boy .I am not to ask you to translate.
Thank you,forcestrong.
Any else?

去掉had,this morning用一般过去时