一道英语改错题,高手请进!在线等...

一道英语改错题,高手请进!在线等...
Dear Mary
I've received your E-mail. Don't worried about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I'm afraid that I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in our future work.Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life.If you study hardly, you will be succeed .Do remember that where there is a will there is a way.I'm looking forward to hear good news from you
麻烦各位了~
这题十分 似乎 一分一个错...还有补充错误的吗