一句英语句子语法是否有问题?In winter,the temperature drops to -30 and very few people attempt to cross the Pass,that's why the monks prefer the winter season because of bringing them more privacy.that's why 还是 that's the reason why?

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一句英语句子语法是否有问题?
In winter,the temperature drops to -30 and very few people attempt to cross the Pass,that's why the monks prefer the winter season because of bringing them more privacy.
that's why 还是 that's the reason why?

我觉得你说的那个地方没问题,但后面好像有问题把
because of 后面要加名词啊 而且前面的好像也也问题
temperature drops tp -30 这句话在drops 后面应该加个介词才对

that is the reason why

that's why 是可以的 但because of 意思重复 可以使用一个定语从句或分词短语 改成bringing them more privacy 或 which brings them more privacy

都对,加个the reason插入语而已

都可以.