改英语语法错误I entered ChangZhou engineering institue in SEP 2006,and i studied computer networking there.In SEP 2008,I went to Canada to continue studied computer networking,however,my favor is not in computer.I like business,so I came back from Canada in OCT 2009.I can use computer very well,and my english is not bad.In Canada,my life was alone,studied and went out for working,so I can deal with things well with confidence,I also have loyal to the company

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I entered ChangZhou engineering institue in SEP 2006,and i studied computer networking there.In SEP 2008,I went to Canada to continue studied computer networking,however,my favor is not in computer.I like business,so I came back from Canada in OCT 2009.I can use computer very well,and my english is not bad.In Canada,my life was alone,studied and went out for working,so I can deal with things well with confidence,I also have loyal to the company.I hope you will think hire me.THX.

我做了一下修改,不一定很好,供你参考吧:I entered ChangZhou Engineering Institue to study computer networking in SEP 2006.And I went to Canada to continue studying computer networking in SEP 2008.But my...