请帮忙改正一下英文句子中的语法错误1、Sadness and home sick are not the most crucial thing in your life.2、I think you can make it if you fllow the advice below.3、Making more friends could make you get the warm that you feel at home.

Sadness and home sick is not the most crucial thing in your life.主语都是不可数名词
I think you can do it if you fllow the advice below.用do不用make
Making more friends could make you to get the warm that you feel at home.
make sb. to do sth.这个是固定使用方法

1、Sadness and home sick are not the most crucial thing in your life.2、I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.3、Making more friends could make you get the warm that you feel at home.
都是正确的

改正：、
1、Sadness and home sick is not the most crucial thing in your life.
2、I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
3、Making more friends could make you get the warm as you feel at home.

1 things
2 belowing
3 the 去掉

1.Being sad and homesick is not the most crucial thing in your life.
2.I think you can make it if you take the advice as follows.
3.Making more friends could make you get the warmth that you feel at home.