帮我看看这段英语有语法错误吗?It can be observed in the picture that there is a boy who racing in the ground while he arrived the race line, but he being not stop running with smile dawned on face and sweat streamed on head. And he wears the skirt which has a word "run" with five-pointed star. As is indicated that the boy who still running have reached the end line.

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帮我看看这段英语有语法错误吗?
It can be observed in the picture that there is a boy who racing in the ground while he arrived the race line, but he being not stop running with smile dawned on face and sweat streamed on head. And he wears the skirt which has a word "run" with five-pointed star. As is indicated that the boy who still running have reached the end line.

有好几处,例如:a boy who racing in the ground 应该是a boy who is racing in the ground

或许没吧

It can be observed (用seen更好些)in the picture that (可以省略that)there is a boy who racing(is racing)in (on)the ground while he arrived the race line.But he can't stop runing with smile and s...