英语翻译这个比赛是中国教育部为全国大学生举办的which Chinese Ministry of Education for the National undergraduate organized professional competition他为雀巢设计的作品以江西省第一名的成绩夺得了全国第二He designed for Nestle’s graphic works as the first of Jiangxi Province to won the 2nd place of the country同时,她的另一幅作品也拿到了江西省第三In addition ,his other graphic design and planning were given a third of Jiangxi Province因此她也拿到了来自广告公司的实习邀请.但因为学业未能成行.For this ,he also won the intership from international 4A McC

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英语翻译
这个比赛是中国教育部为全国大学生举办的
which Chinese Ministry of Education for the National undergraduate organized professional competition
他为雀巢设计的作品以江西省第一名的成绩夺得了全国第二
He designed for Nestle’s graphic works as the first of Jiangxi Province to won the 2nd place of the country
同时,她的另一幅作品也拿到了江西省第三
In addition ,his other graphic design and planning were given a third of Jiangxi Province
因此她也拿到了来自广告公司的实习邀请.但因为学业未能成行.
For this ,he also won the intership from international 4A McCann Erickson and Publicis Groupe's.But because the school work did not take place.
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同时=At the same time , In addition=另外,此外的意思 ;for this =这个 , therefore=因此,
这个比赛是中国教育部为全国大学生举办的
The competition was held China Ministry of education forNational College Students