英语翻译聂海胜,男,湖北枣阳人.1964年9月出生,1983年6月参军,1986年12月入党.1998年1月成为我国首批航天员之一.2005年10月12日,聂海胜乘坐"神舟''六号飞船飞向太空.10月17日,他们安全返回地面.聂海胜有一个幸福的家庭

Nie Haisheng, male, is from Zaoyang, Hubei Province.He was born on September of 1964.On June of 1983, he joined the army and joined the Party on December of 1986.On January of 1998, he became one of first astronauts of China.On October 12th of 2005, Nie Haisheng flew to the space by "Shenzhou" VI spacecraft.And on October 17th, they returned to the earth safely. Nie Haisheng has a happy family.

Nie Haisheng ,male,born in Hubei Zaoyang on September,1964.
Take part in the Art in June,1983.joined the Party in December,1986.
Being one of the first bach of astronaut.He take ShengZhou VI towrds to the space on October 12,2005,and he return to the earth safely on 17th October.He has a happy family.

on September 1964
这么明显的错误也犯?
只有说到年月日才用on,其他年或年月或月都用in的啊
哎,我的译文是：
Nie Haisheng, male, from Zaoyang City, Hubei Province, was born in September 1964. Nie joined the army in June 1983 and turned into a * Party member in December 1986. He became one of China's first batch astronauts in January 1998. On October 12th 2005, Nie Haisheng flew to the outer space by taking "Shenzhou" VI spacecraft. And on October 17th, he with his companions landed back to the earth safely. Nie has a happy family.