英语翻译贵单位报检的该批货物,经我司检验检疫,已合格.请执此单到宁波局本部办理出境验证业务,本单有效期截止于2006年11月27日The goods delivered from your company have passed our checking and are qualified,please go to Ningbo Bureau Head Office and run exit certificate-testing operation with this bill,the bill`s effective date will expire on December 28,2006,请问上面的翻译对吗?该怎么修改更好?

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英语翻译
贵单位报检的该批货物,经我司检验检疫,已合格.请执此单到宁波局本部办理出境验证业务,本单有效期截止于2006年11月27日
The goods delivered from your company have passed our checking and are qualified,please go to Ningbo Bureau Head Office and run exit certificate-testing operation with this bill,the bill`s effective date will expire on December 28,2006,
请问上面的翻译对吗?该怎么修改更好?

The goods declared by your company has been inspected and quarantined by us and they are qualified for exporting.Please hold this bill of document to go to headquarter of ningbo Entry-Exit Inspection and Quarantine Bureau and transact the departure verification affairs.This bill of document will expire on Nov 27,2006.