our school作文

Our school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It's so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.The teachers work very hard.They love us as if we were their children.Especially our headmaster - Mr. Bai. He's about 40 years old.When we meet some problems,he often helps us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!谢谢帮忙没事~~O(∩_∩)O不过我觉得还缺点啥

缺点啥呢？字数少的事吗？还是对学校多点细节描写？我重发了一份，但字数超过限制了，发不上去。我把作文用word上传个附件，你下载下来就能看到了！O(∩_∩)O