英语翻译我自己我叫TOM,我今年12岁,是一个男生.我在西夏区上学,我家住在怡安小区,我喜欢蓝色,喜欢穿牛仔裤,爱吃西瓜……这就是我!

Hello, my name is TOM, I'm 12 years old, a boy. Xixia I go to school, have 6 grade. I live in Aon area, I like blue, like to wear jeans, eat watermelon ... ...This is me!

Hi, my name is Tom. I'm twelve. I'm a boy. My school's in Xixia, and I'm already in sixth grade. I live in Yian community. My favorite color's blue. I like to wear jeans, and I love to eat watermelons. This is me!

我有个建议：“是一个男生”可以删掉，因为这个听你介绍的人看得见呀。
其实上面的几位都已经很好了，我的意见如下(我觉得如果是当面演说的话，我这样的比较亲切)：
Hello everybody，I'm Tom.Nice to meet you here! I'm 12，a grade 6 shool boy form Jiangxia district.My home is in Yian community.I like blue, jeans, and watermelon. That's me. And I hope I can be your friend, thank you!
希望能帮到你！

Hello everybody， my name is Tom, I'm 12 years old. I'm in Grade 6 in an elementary school of Xixia District. My home is in Yi'an apartment area. I like blue,like jeans，like watermelon…
That’s all， Thanks！

Hello,my name is TOM.I am 12 years old.I am a boy.I am a student in Xixiaqu School.I live in an apartment building,the name of it is Yian.I like blue.And I am often in blue pants.My favorite fruit is watermelon.
That is all.Thank you.

Hello, my name is Tom, 12, boy. I am a student of Grade 6 in Xixia District. My home is in Yi'an area. I like blue, jeans, and watermelon.That's me.

Hello,my name is TOM, I am a boy of age 12.Now I study in the Xixia District as a Grade 6 student.It's the Yi'an community that my family lives in.I'm fond of the color of blue,and I also prefer wearing jeans.As far as I am concerned,watermelon is so delicious that I like it best...
All in all,that's me!
...高三强迫症...用了好些短语句型进去...希望你满意吧=W=