有没有英语高手可以帮忙检查一下句子有无错误,并帮忙翻译下,谢谢!

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有没有英语高手可以帮忙检查一下句子有无错误,并帮忙翻译下,谢谢!
This book is graded readers.It tells to we many knowledge.Such as:the story of Piccsso,mime origin,ancient Egypt artists how to draw a portrait?In the book,you can solve these questions.And in the book,don't have difficult sentences.These are many pictures.It's very interesting,worth a look.

this book is graded readers 没看懂第二句错误 it tells us many knowledge,such as the story of Piccsso,mime origin,and ancient Egypt artists.建议把后面那啥how to 去掉后面一句差不多在后面一句不对 the boo...内个哈。ancient Egypt artists how to draw a portrait?本来想问古埃及艺术家如何绘制肖像,请问该怎么改?因为前面两个都是单独的单词或者词组,并列的第三个用了从句会显得比较奇怪。建议去掉,不去掉也没什么关系。有两种改法1.as the story of Piccsso, mime origin, and ancient Egypt artists‘ portraits.2.as the story of Piccsso, mime origin, and how ancient Egypt artists drew portraits.