英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文

英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文
There is a traditional festival in China called * Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.*s are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On the eve of * Festival,all the *s are hung up.Many people like eating rice glue balls、watching the lion dance and guessing the riddle at the * Festival.Do you know the ‘guess the riddle’?It’s a interesting game.People write the riddles on the laterns,and let others guess.The rice glue balls are traditional Chinese food.Do you like eating them?I thank them are very delicious.
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