Many people were deeply moved when hearing his story.这个动词,move,可以做感动来说吧,感动用什么词啊,这个句子动词用对了吗

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Many people were deeply moved when hearing his story.这个动词,move,可以做感动来说吧,感动用什么词啊,这个句子动词用对了吗
如果不这样说,应该换一种说法怎么说?

感动可以用moved来讲.
你这个句子里when 后面引导的是个状语,如果要保留hearing的话,应该说成Hearing his story,many people were deeply moved.
不过你的这个句子其实是可以说得通的,可以理解为许多人一听到他的故事就很感动.但是通常不这么说,通常的说法是Many people were deeply moved when heared his story.意思是许多人听到他的故事后非常感动.