英语大神进!急~

英语大神进!急~
这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~
My Big Family
Do you like your family?Most people will say“Of course”.Your family will make you happy when you feel upset.So is my family.It’s really big but warm enough.There are eight people in my family. I’m glad to let you know them.
My grandfather is a brave political instructor before.He left many scars from the army.He has dug in many caves.When he told me these things,he always smiled.Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists.He wrote an article about this cave and sent it to the company.He also have the studens all over the China.Some of them usually call him up.And some of them usually visit him.He is popular before,isn’t he?
My grandma cooks very well.Her education isn’t very good but she is a really good grandma.Shequitted her job to look after me when I was very young.I thaked her a lot.
My father is a fireman before.But now,he is a officer.He becomes fatter and fatter.So,he persist in playing badminton with his colleagues twice a week.He is thinner now.But he likes to eat sweets,especially candy flass.When I remind him not to eat sweet so much.Of course,it goes in one ear and out the other.
How about my mother?She is proud to draw or paint a beautiful picture.She does well in handicraft.I have to admit her talent.But she isn’t rational when she is shopping!She buy a lot of coat and shoes.
My aunt is a kind woman.She usually shopping with my mother.She is my father’s sister.She usually give me presents.She is very fashionable.She has almost been to all the cake shops.Isn’t that crazy?
My uncle is a humorous person.He is my aunt’s husband. He is not only a elder ,but also a friend.We usually talked on phone before he became my uncle.He is good at computer.So,he usually tells me the most popular large games.
The last one is my cousin.He is my aunt’s son.He is only 5 years old now.But he is infatuated with cartoons and toy cars.He has more than one hundred toy cars in different sizes and colors.He likes to watch me playing computer games,too.I have to play games about spiderman or superman everyday.He usually fights with my father .That’s inevitable because he was born in the year of chicken.And my father was born in the year of dog.
We eat dinner together almost every night.Do you like my family?