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What
motivates people to change?
Human have the best and the worthiest quality
at the same time,and in my opinion,they all come from desire.Because of
desire,people begin to seek,to chase.People all have dreams,however not
everybody is able to achieve the dream,and because of desire,people learn to
change themselves.
I do not want to discuss if the America Civil
War was right or wrong,it was already the history.The slavery was prevalent
for over 200 years,people all knew it was unfair and undemocratic.In the end,
the reason why the northern army finally decided to begin the war was the lack
of labors of factories,while the South owned a large number of slaveries who
have the potential to become free labors.And after the Emancipation was
written during the Civil War,the reason why lots of slaveries ran away and joined
the northern army risking their lives and helped the North to finally win was that
they want the freedom.The North desired more benefits,while the slaveries
desired the freedom.The northern army won the bloody Civil War,and the
America history was changed-the slaveries were set free.And now when we look
at the war,the result is relatively positive-everyone in the U.S.has got a
relatively racial equality and freedom.
As it is said,to change is to risk
something.People never know a change is positive or negative,but “desire”
does have the strength.Desire is able to motivate people to change themselves,
to change people around them,the history,and even the world.