From now I try to write diary in English有语法错误吗From now I try to write diary in EnglishIf you found something wrong you must tell me.Because my English is poor.I want to worked in Chartered BankSo English is very importent.I must study every dayalthough tried and diffcult but I carry throughthen now I tell you a new word Bankruptcy(means a man who lose own money)In Chinese is 破产者Ok I feel sleepy.GoodnightzzZSee you tomorrow,
问题描述:
From now I try to write diary in English有语法错误吗
From now I try to write diary in English
If you found something wrong you must tell me.
Because my English is poor.
I want to worked in Chartered Bank
So English is very importent.
I must study every day
although tried and diffcult but I carry through
then now I tell you a new word
Bankruptcy(means a man who lose own money)
In Chinese is 破产者
Ok
I feel sleepy.
Goodnight
zzZ
See you tomorrow,
答
第一句就觉得过于中文化
从现在开始是from now on
答
除了第三句很贴切其他都有错误或很生硬。。
答
应该是From now on.
是 从今以后 的意思
If you find anything 不是something
I want to work in Chartered bank 动词不定式, 用原型
although I am tired and it is diffcult, I carry through
缺少主语, I, it, 还有, 用了although就不能再用but
英文里面 虽然, 和 但是 只要出现一个就可以了