英语改错 When l was in high school.l had an awful exp英语改错When l was in high school.l had an awful experience.At that time l was so brave and outgoing as the others.Because of that.A boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me.I was scaring to see him.So yesterday.A friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me to dine out.I agreed.We met in a bar and l was so happy that nothing went well.By the end of that night.Big Tom apologized for what he h
英语改错 When l was in high school.l had an awful exp
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When l was in high school.l had an awful experience.At that time l was so brave and outgoing as the others.Because of that.A boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me.I was scaring to see him.
So yesterday.A friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me to dine out.I agreed.We met in a bar and l was so happy that nothing went well.By the end of that night.Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me.Now we have become close friends.
In our life.Everyone may make mistakes.What counts most are that we have the courage to correct them.
I was as brave
Because of that, a boy named Big Tom did all.....
I was scared to.....
So yesterday, a friend......wanted to ask me.....
so happy that everything went well
what he had done to me
What counts most is that...
as the others 改为 than the others ;a boy name 改为named;scaring改为 scared;So yesterday 改为Yesterday， ；.What counts most are 中are 改为 is
When l was in high school.l had an awful experience.At that time l was so brave and outgoing as others.Because of that.A boy named Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me.I was scared to see hi...