英语作文...帮我看看有没有错.. 扣几分啊、There are too much pressure because we are studying for the entrance exam.So we have even harder lives than some adults.But we can also find some happiness while studying hard.In my spare time,I can always get pleasure because I can do every thing I want to do.For example,I like playing basketball.It makes me both happy and healthy.What's more,I like reading books with much knowledge.I really enjoy it.This is my spare time.It's

英语作文...帮我看看有没有错.. 扣几分啊、
There are too much pressure because we are studying for the entrance exam.So we have even harder lives than some adults.
But we can also find some happiness while studying hard.
In my spare time,I can always get pleasure because I can do every thing I want to do.
For example,I like playing basketball.It makes me both happy and healthy.What's more,I like reading books with much knowledge.I really enjoy it.
This is my spare time.It's just like a colorful,relaxing and different world for me.

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