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A present for my mother
Today is my mother’s birthday .In order to express my thankless and love. L will send her my favourite thing---my promise .Her strong wish is to travel all over the world. So l will promise to travel all over the world with her in the future. L think she will be happy.

thankless 改成thanks,So l will promise to travel all over the world with her in the future.可改成:So l promise to travel all over the world with her in the future./So l promise I will travel all over ...可不可以把thankless改成thankness?根本就没有thankness这个词, thank本身就可作名词.因此, 不可以把thankless改成thankness,而是改成: thanks,