Tamara is twelve years old.She was in junior one.She was a good student in the s

Tamara is twelve years old.She was in junior one.She was a good student in the s
Tamara is twelve years old.She was in junior one.She was a good student in the school.She was good at all the subjects,except history.She didn’t like history at all.She thought the history textboob was so boring that she didn’t want to look at it.Her father thought:” I must make her like history.” At last he got an idea.He went to the scientist office and bought a ticket.If you have this ticket,you can get on a “Time Bus” which can send someone to the past.Then,she bring the tacket and get on the “Time Bus”.The bus sent Tamara to the past to learn all about life at the end of 20th century.
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