【英语高手来】帮我看看这些句子语法对不对,不对的指出来,

【英语高手来】帮我看看这些句子语法对不对,不对的指出来,
1,I always think wildly of the things that may never happen with my chins lying on the window.
2,One day,when I was thinking that someone might help me with my homework,I saw a person looked exactly the same as me.I thought he was to help me with my homework.However,he wanted to punch me.
3,I was beaten black and blue,and wanted to find someone to rescure me.
4,However,the enemies became more and more,and they all hit me.
5,I thought I could only rely on myself.Thinking without a purpose could only make it worse.
6,Gradually,I became clear.
7,I shouted out loudly,"I can only rely on myself,and finish my own staff",then I became strong,and beat all of them.
8,In fact ,it was only a dream.
9,Well,I'go and finish my homework with my own effort.
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1 What if someone could help me with my homework.
2 Who are you?; I am you.I wanna beat you.
3 Ouch!It hurts!Who can help me?
4 Why are there more and more people?
5 I see!
6 I'm gonna beat you down!
7 I was just a dream
8 Well,I'd rather do my homework!Rely on myself.
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