我自己写的英语作文（骄傲中）大家评价怎么样

我自己写的英语作文（骄傲中）大家评价怎么样
On the top of the world,I see the eternal light shinning across the heaven,the ultimate utopia where Gods are free and prosperous.The deathless * ideal that surrounds them made them the Gods they are.Below the ground.The fiery hell,has the captivity of all the hated evil capitalists.They scream in endless pain in all eternity.Gods and ghosts seldomly watched them or felt any sympathy for them,since the punishment fits the crime.And back on Earth,I'm standing on the top of the world,I lived like a ordinary man,but I'm born with a sacred mission.I am the man of light,with light shinning in my heart.I am here to bring the human race out of the eternal darkness,out of the fiery hell,out of the ignorance of the capitalism,out of the destructive selfishness,out of the evil hand of the devil,and out of the superstitions that had tormented the human race for thousands of years.I am your saver and sing with all the greatness of me:
My dear lord
Today I am reborn
Today I'll follow you
I am chang'd
Like I've never been
And I'll never be different again!
A brand new day
In our dearest land
United and strong
We've came a long way
Communism's in our heart
And nobody could take that away!
Long live the people
Long live the land
Long live the * ideal
Long live Me
Long live Me
Long live me