06 As is vividly demonstrated in the pictures above,Beckham,the smart British football superstar,

06 As is vividly demonstrated in the pictures above,Beckham,the smart British football superstar,
英语作文,帮我看看有没有语法错误和用词不当的,以及怎样修改,非常非常感谢,一鞠躬：）
As is vividly demonstrated in the pictures above,Beckham,the smart British football superstar,is enjoying a striking popularity among the adolescents.In the fist picture,Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face.In the send picture,another young man is dong Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop.What is conveyed in the photos is most thought-provoking and worth discussing among the general public,especially young people.
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of idol worship.To begin with,that kind of star-worshipping is not uncommon nowadays among the Chinese people.For example,the so-called “Super Girls” become fashionable almost overnight,with fans chasing after them in a kind of blind worship.What’s more,just as a coin has two sides,so does celebrity worships.One side is that people blindly chase after celebrities,exhibiting absurd behavior and making fools of themselves,forgetting about their own lives.The followers are then followed by other,creating a social current that is hard to resist.The other side is that through celebrity appreciation and worship,people can see examples of success.They can understand that it is possible to gain widespread recognition and can use these examples as something to reach for.
To my way of thinking,nothing is more important than to receive education as for student.Accordingly,counter-measure must be taken immediately so as to converse the trend revealed in the picture.On the one hand,a widespread education must be lunched to popularize correct idol worship concepts.We should bring home to people this type of crazy action is no what we need for the future of our country.On the other hand,a healthy social environment should be created so as to guide the development of people’s mind.Only in this way can we building a harmonious society.