这篇英语短文还有哪要修改的?
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这篇英语短文还有哪要修改的?
Michael Jackson was born on August 29th 1958 in the USA.And he died six months ago when he was 50 years old.He started to writing music when he was ten years old.He was one of the most popular musicians in the world.Michael Jackson is famous for moonwalk.His dances and songs are very beautiful.I like Michael Jackson very much.
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born in
started writting
语法错误,基本上很好!