英语作文纠错

英语作文纠错
I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing * in last saturday.The photo,fiilled with horror and anger what T was so astonished and sad.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...Over 300000 chinses people were killed!Even when the days are gone fover.W mustn't be forgotten.
我英语很烂···特别是语法,帮忙纠正纠正=
其他问题还有没？语法都对了么？There were many inhuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...这句话我自己写的时候都觉得怪怪的= =没错吗