一道英语改错题10分!

一道英语改错题10分!
like many teenagers in china,most of my spare time was
spent doing my homework .or i don't have enough time to
do what i'm interseted in even on weekends or on holiday
the first thing which i enjoy when i have a few spare
minute is to listen to music .it's the best way for me to
escape the stress of their study.when i listen to music .
it is like go to another world.sometimes ,the words of
the songs seem to express exact how i'm feeling .
besides ,i'm also intersted in a fashion and i'm always
searching someting special that can reflect my personality
PS:其中有一句是正确的.错误包括用词错误比如（A换成B)
缺词（AB间缺少C）.词汇多余（AB去掉B）