修改一下这几句:I‘m awake now,too.I have exams recently,so I‘m really a little busy.I want to suggested that you can change your hairstyle into crew cut.Actually your hair is a little long as you are a man. I think when you cut hair shorter into crew cut,you will be cooler.另外再*发挥加几句话,表达相近的意思就行了的

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修改一下这几句:
I‘m awake now,too.I have exams recently,so I‘m really a little busy.I want to suggested that you can change your hairstyle into crew cut.Actually your hair is a little long as you are a man. I think when you cut hair shorter into crew cut,you will be cooler.
另外再*发挥加几句话,表达相近的意思就行了的

I'm awake now,too.I have exams recently,so I'll be a little busy.I hope you can forgive me if I fail to reply on time.By the way,I want to suggest that you change your hairstyle to crew cut.Actually your hair is a little too long for a man.I sincerely think that the crew cut suits you better and that you will look cool with it.
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