商务英语memo作文!

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商务英语memo作文!
速度质量高的话我追加到50分!
内容是这样的:
write a memo,for the attention of Michael Chau,summarising the problems that you discussed.Recommend a course of action to improve the situation.Give reasons for the actions you propose.
1楼是自己写的么?好不好再加长一点点?如果OK我立刻给50分!

To:Michael Chau
From:xxx
Subject:The problems we discussed
We have discussed the problem about the high turnover of our company.They can be contributed to low salary,few communication,poor working conditions.Thus,I advise to implement more activities so that all the employees will have opportunities to communicate with each other.This will be helpful in decreasing their unsatisfaction and inspiring higher performance.
Looking forward to hearing your opinions.
xxx