the good relationship between us students and our teachers ,is a relationship that can makes our teaching atmosphere mor
问题描述：
the good relationship between us students and our teachers ,is a relationship that can makes our teaching atmosphere more and more harmonious ,which depends on our joint efforts to promote.请大家帮我看看这句话有错么?我写的
答
前半句可以这样改the good relationship between students and teachers which can make our teaching atmosphere more and more harmonious.(重复过多,表达不怎么清晰,特别是which depends on our joint efforts to...