谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文的错误?
谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文的错误?
这是直接在google翻译的.(1) the mother was ill,lie on the bed,I sat in the mother's bedside computers.
(2) mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed,but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me.Said she was felt which place not feeling too well,say again she had a terrible dream,say her young from time to tome how healthy,one is able to do many live.Then I always very impatient.
(3) once,mother suddenly crouched over come closer to computer said:"you always do on your computer?Don't you feel tired?"
4 "chat." I impatiently say.
[" chat?And who talk?" Mother asked again.
[6] "a field of,don't know."
[7] "incognizant?" Mother seemed very puzzled,"that is said what ah?"
Stuff "anyway also boring,literally say what also do the same."
⑼ "oh." Mother cryptically watched,and as a tired though long give a sigh,to lie to go back to bed.
⑽ again I chatted,inadvertently old look at her mother,she is the zheng fix attention on staring at the ceiling with rapture.My heart suddenly move.My name is here with mother,but can do for her some rice pour water outside,also do?
My mother is born when mercenary dropped the trouble,for many years has been praised by illnesses,this year is added in the many this elderly patient.Maybe because mother longyear sick,she care,we also become accustomed,sometimes home on the weekends and seldom think to be active and help her do something,always her every ground stem this dry it.
⑿ mother the sick,is tired disease.She was ill,not only get our sympathy,but who saw she would complain,think she tire yourself ill,harm we also follow involvement.Whenever we complain mother always didn't say anything,as if she really like doing something wrong.
[13] I turn off the computer,give mother cup of water.Without waiting for what I said,the mother said:"see computer tired eyes?Quick lie down with his eyes closed and rest a while."
14 I promise,pull a quilt lay in the mother's side.I said,"mom,you tell me what you had before,let me see if I can write articles."
⒂ mother surprise to temporarily don't know what to say.I lay silent and waited patiently for she said.
Displayed suddenly felt that the original lying in mother's side,is such feeling warm.
⒄ but I have forgotten for many years问题补充：
Mother was ill in bed,I sat on her bed playing computer.
Sometimes the mother fell asleep,but more often she was awake.His waking hours,in addition to activities to get up a little bit to the outside on the balcony,like the eyes open in bed.Most of the time the mother was lying quietly in bed,but sometimes she will want to talk to me tentatively,that which she had felt uncomfortable place,and said she had a terrible dream,and said how healthy she was young,how much work a person capable of.At this time I'm always impatient,his eyes never leave the screen half an inch,said:"Do you want to point something else you all right?How ill always want to own?" Whenever this time,the mother no longer speak,but After a while,
She began unconsciously to say.So,will stir up my meal complain.
On one occasion,the mother suddenly leaned leaned computer said:"You've been doing on the computer?Not you tired?"
"Chat." I said impatiently.
"Chat?Whom talk ah?" The mother asked.
"A field,and do not know."
"Do not know?" Mother seems very puzzled,"what did it say?"
"Anyway,are boring and say nothing line." I said.
"Oh." His mother looked for a moment thoughtfully,like a tired like heavy sigh,lay back in bed again.
I chatted for a while,accidentally turned around to see his mother,who was wide open seeing the ceiling lost in thought.
Suddenly I thought of a move.
My name is here with her mother,can do something in addition to rice for her a glass of water,but also do?
When the mother is angry with me down the root cause,over the years has always been of illnesses in recent years have added a lot of elderly patients on,perhaps because the mother perennial illness,she does not care,we have become accustomed to,and sometimes weekends home,also do something to help her think less active,always a man inside and out to her do this or that.The mother fall ill,it is because apart and wash the winter coat,but also planing a piece of land after the building was Leibing's.She was sick,instead of getting our sympathy,but who met her would complain,feel she gave her Leibing,which led to our involvement also followed.When we complain,
Mother always silent,as if she really did something wrong,like.However,she did something wrong?
I turned off the computer for my mother a cup of water.Before I say anything,his mother said:"look at the computer tired your eyes,take a break soon lie down and eyes closed."
I agreed with,pull on the bed quilt to lie beside my mother,but her mother,a down jacket into my quilt on the pressure,saying:"Heating stopped,cover a quilt to sleep will be cold."
I said:"I do not sleep.Mom,you gave me about your past,and I see if I can write articles."
Mother surprise was wondering what to say.I lay still,patiently waiting for her to say.
I suddenly felt the original lying mother,is such a warm feeling ah ------warm.