英语短文改错 I live in a big city,where few people smoked in public nowI live in a big city,where few people smoked in public now.Last week,I went to the small village with a friend,and what I saw there was really shocked.People smoked almost nowhere in the village.We smoked not only outside but also in the houses.That was more shocking to me was that people there didn't think about secondhand smoking was harmful.The villager even smoked when little kids or
英语短文改错 I live in a big city,where few people smoked in public now
I live in a big city,where few people smoked in public now.Last week,I went to the small village with a friend,and what I saw there was really shocked.People smoked almost nowhere in the village.We smoked not only outside but also in the houses.That was more shocking to me was that people there didn't think about secondhand smoking was harmful.The villager even smoked when little kids or babies were around.I really couldn't stand the smell,but people there didn't seem mind others smoking at all.I think a lot should be do to prevent people in villages from smoking.
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I live in a big city，where few people （smoke) in public now.Last week，I went to “the”(改a) small village with a friend，and what I saw there was really shocked（shocking）.People smoked almost （everywhere） in the village.We （they）smoked not only outside but also in the houses.That（改it） was more shocking to me was that people there didn't think about secondhand smoking was harmful.The villager even smoked when little kids or babies were around.I really couldn't stand （bear）the smell,but people there didn't seem mind others smoking at all.I think （thought）a lot （what i）should do to prevent people in villages from smoking.
few－fewer
the -a
shocked- shocking
nowhere- everywhere
We-they
That-what
villager -villagers
mind-to mind
do-done
villages-the village