请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对

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请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对
1.In the box,it's a book which I bought in America for my first time going there.
2.Look to this bar.Is it strange?
3.I hate them two!
4."新的一岁"怎么说?
5.in the new coming time(我想表达“在新到来的日子里”)
如果有错误请帮我纠正一下,

1.In the box,there is a book which I bought in America at my first time going there.
2.Look this bar.Is it strange?
3
4 a new year
5 in the coming days