写了首词,帮我看看有没有错句吧,英文的

问题描述:

写了首词,帮我看看有没有错句吧,英文的
Please don't leave me
Because I love you too
What is the reason
Make you lose yourself
I will be here
Waiting for you come back
Goodbye my love
Say goodbye again
Don't want to say anything
帮我改好,然后再写出来就可以,不要原文上修改的

有一点点的错误,改正后如下:

Please don't leave me
Because I love you (too) so much
What is the reason
(Make)Making you lose yourself
I will be here
Waiting for you (come)to come back
Goodbye my love
Say goodbye again
(Don't want to say anything)最好改为Just want to say nothing