My grandpa who live in countryside has illness.

问题描述:

My grandpa who live in countryside has illness.
My grandpa who live in countryside has illness.
这句子有什么问题?

live改为lives,has illness 改为was ill.单复数用错和表达错误.目测的供参考那illness怎么用啊?has mental illness.有精神病。 illness是名词,与形容词搭配较多,上面那个后半截语法上好像没错,只不过我看着像中国式英语,所以给改了。