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Dear Liu
Fei I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to computer games.Now I am giving you some tips that may work.Spending too much time and energy on computer is harmful to our health and computer games are something illusory,if you lose yourself in it,you may become isolated from the real world and ignore the beauty and love in life.I think you can try to distract your attention,for example,you can play basketball or other sports with your friends,which can not only help you keep healthy,but strengthen your friendship; you can communicate with your parents and friends,sharing your happiness and sorrow with them; you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge in your spare time.Best wishes
yours sincerely
Li Huan