,I believe that work more serious,people will be better luck.这句话没有语病吧

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,I believe that work more serious,people will be better luck.
这句话没有语病吧

有语病,修改:
I believe people will have better luck if they work harder.

我觉得有
首先work是动词,后面的serious要用的话,应该是副词形式seriously.
其次,be后面应该用形容词,better也是用于形容词的,所以luck应该为lucky.

i believe that if people work more seriously,they will be more lucky/they will have better luck!