以《My School》为题的英语作文.

我写的多一点，我会给你中文的翻译，你觉得有哪里多余了自己可以删减。希望你能够把分数给我。嘻嘻~
My school:
I wanna say my high school's memory.My school is an art school.My school is not very beautiful in the outside.In my memory,good or bad things are happened in the school to me. But all the time it’s my school.In this school,I have the good basic ability at art.We have more than fifty teachers in my school.We have the three or four part school.Some students hobby is painting just like me.I am this school’s top students in painting.I think my school gives me more choice to learn more things.Like painting,design something,phothgraphy and so on.In my momery,the best happy time is in the school,in there,I use finished my youth flightly time.
翻译：
我的学校：
我想要说我的高中的记忆。我的学校是一个艺术学校。我的学校在外观上来说，不是非常的漂亮。在我的记忆里，在学校里在我身上发生过好的和坏的事情。但是，它始终是我的学校。在学校里，我有了很好的美术基本功。在我们学校里，我们有五十个以上的老师。我们有三到四个分校。我认为，我们学校给了我们更多的机会去学习更多的东西。像是画画，设计一些东西，摄影等等。在我的记忆里，学校是我最快乐的时光，在那儿，我用完了我的年少轻狂的时光。

My name is Paul. I\'m 16 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hui\'an. My school is very big and beautiful. I\'m very happy in the school.
I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes, because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It\'s very interesting and exciting. I think it\'s helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play basketball, soccer ball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn\'t it?

给你几篇范文吧：
1、I have a very beautiful school.In spring the flat school afforestation floret has opened ,all the colours of the rainbow has been very beautiful let people pay attention to very much.In summer Da Shu is luxuriant that we have fun ,play ,chat under Da Shu is extremely amusing.Fragrans has bloomed ,entire campus has immersed in multicolored ocean middle in autumn.We have a snowball fight ,pile up a snowman in winter on the public square awfully.I love my campus.I love the campus four seasons of the year.I love the campus bits and pieces ,one spends one wood.
2、The school life is very busy but exciting.There are many activities in or school,we all take an active part in it.I have made many new friends and we ofter help and learn from each other in study.Our teachers have taught us a lot.They tell us what is worth doing,what is worth doing well and many other things.