请帮忙检查一下下面的英语文章的语法和单词拼写My favorite season is summer.But in the summer,the weather is hot.So we will buy some cold drinks and fruitI love ice cream and watermelon.They are very delicious.But my mother told me,I can not eat too much,they make my stomachache.Mother love to eat peaches and bitter,but I do not like bitter melon.I think bitter is bad.There are many insects in summer,they always called and bites people.I hate insects.But the summer is good,wh

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请帮忙检查一下下面的英语文章的语法和单词拼写
My favorite season is summer.
But in the summer,the weather is hot.So we will buy some cold drinks and fruit
I love ice cream and watermelon.They are very delicious.
But my mother told me,I can not eat too much,they make my stomachache.
Mother love to eat peaches and bitter,but I do not like bitter melon.I think bitter is bad.
There are many insects in summer,they always called and bites people.I hate insects.
But the summer is good,when the outside when it rains,We were will feel cool.
I believe I will have the most fun summer

时态问题,怎么一会现在一会过去一会将来,要统一,还有就是要用好关联词,

In summer. fruits.

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