Hi,Alice!What's this in English?This is an apple.请告诉我这句话哪里错了!

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Hi,Alice!What's this in English?This is an apple.请告诉我这句话哪里错了!

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没有问题,这应该是一个对话吧!可能老师觉得你书写格式不正确,规范的是:
---Hi,Alice!What's this in English?
---This is an apple.

没有问题啊!

好像没有错哦!