]a visit to shanghai英语作文是"in shanghai"还是"to shanghai"?帮我再写一下作文,60字就好了

说老实话，我一直对试用期 一级 不感冒，我经常遇到那些不负责任的试用期一级的，我辛辛苦苦帮他回答问题了，结果他不处理，把人都气得死。希望你不会！
楼主，追加几十分撒！我原创好辛苦嘛！
第一句：I had a nice time in Shanghai this vacation.
第二句：It was a very happy visition!
第三句：Shanghai is one of the municipalities directly under the Central Government.
第四句：It is bulit at the coast of East Sea.
第五句：Shanghai is so big that I have to visit it by bus and taxi.
第六句：And the night of Shanghai is beautiful too,especially in Waitan and Pudong.
第六句：I love Shanghai!

from shanghai
come from shanghai
我的偶像
My grandfather is a hero
My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.
He used to live with my family. At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day. When I was ill, he took good care of me. He showed great concern.
Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.
Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt. My parents and I all miss him very much. And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.

A Visit to Shanghai Art Museum
Italian Factory:
The art works from Italian Factory represent what Italian artists are thinking about nowadays.They strive to preserve the original taste and form of italian art as globlization is sweeping around the world.We may not understand fully about a piece of their works.But we can feel the inspiration and unique thoughts .Italian Factory is also considered to be the coming of the new Renaissance.
Personally this series of paintings shown below caught my attention immediately after I cast my eyes on them.Just adore the contrasting colours and daring style .

你太没有诚意了，要么就给分，要么就不给，说什么追加呀