When Mr.Smith saw the new coat,he was angry that he has nothing to say.哪错了

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When Mr.Smith saw the new coat,he was angry that he has nothing to say.哪错了

that错,可改为and

When Mr, Smith saw the new coat, he was so angry that he had nothing to say.
When Mr, Smith saw the new coat, he was angry and had nothing to say.

第一,"he has nothing to say“的时态与前面不一致,应该是"he had"
第二,"he was angry that he has nothing to say"用词不当,应该是"he was so angry that he had nothing to say"才对
所以,这句子有两处错误,过去时和用词不当。

he was so angry that he had nothing to say

he was so angry that he has ...
应该是so...that如此以致
太生气以至于无话可说