帮忙看看语法有错误吗?Dear friends,I'm vrry glad to be here .First of all,thank you for making methe student in charge of EnglishIf you have difficulties in learning English,I'll do you some good advice.First,listen,read and sreak English every day .second,listen to the teacher carefully in class ,after class go over carefully.Third,more to do English exercises.These will help you learn English .I'll doeverything,won't let you down.I hope we can study together,p

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Dear friends, I'm very glad to be here .First of all, thank you for electing me the student in charge of English.
If you have difficulties in learning English,i'd like to give you some good advice.
First,read and speak English every day .Second,listen to the teacher carefully in class ,after class go over what you learned in class carefully.Third,do more English exercises.These will help you learn English better .
I'll try my best to do everything that is goodto our English learning.I won't let you down.I hope we can study together,make progress together.
That's all.Thank you.

the student in charge of English.
If you have difficulties in learning English,i'd like to give you some good advice.
First,read and speak English every day .Second,listen to the teacher carefully in class ,after class go over what you learned in class carefully.Third,do more English exercises.These will help you learn English better .
I'll try my best to do everything that is goodto our English learning.I won't let you down.I hope we can study together,make progress together.
That's all.Thank you.

Dear friends, I'm very glad to be here .First of all, thank you for making me the student in charge of English.
If you have difficulties in learning English,I'll give you some good advice.
First,listen,read and speak English every day .Second,listen to the teacher carefully in class ,after class go over carefully.Third,do more English exercises.These will help you learn English .
I'll do everything.I won't let you down.I hope we can study together,make progress together.
That's all.Thank you.

the student in charge of English(不明白此句何意?)
1.If you have difficulties in learning English,I'll give you some good advice.
First,listen,read and sreak English every day.
second,listen to the teacher carefully in class,and after class go over your lessens carefully.Third,to do more English exercises.I think all the above can help you learn English much better.
2.I'll do everything diligently,and I won't let you down.I hope we can study together,progress together.
That's all.Thank you.
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