急,请看我写的这句话有没有时态的错误?Do you have something want to tell me?Leave a messge,please.I'll reply as soon as possible.我拿不定...我语法不好.

问题描述:

急,请看我写的这句话有没有时态的错误?
Do you have something want to tell me?
Leave a messge,please.
I'll reply as soon as possible.
我拿不定...我语法不好.

do you have sonething that you want to tell me

有!
正确的:
Do you have something that you want to tell me ?(Do you have something to tell me?)
Leave a message ,please.

Do you have something to tell me 这样就可以了

第一句
Did / Do you want to tell me something? (用过去时或一般现在时,那就看你的意思了)
第二句中,口信这个单词少了“a”。应该是Leave a message ,please

do you have something to tell me?
不过native speakers一般不会这么问哦
应该是what do you want to tell me?

语法上基本没错误,但是不地道.
Do you have something to tell me?
leave a message,please.
I'll reply to you as soon as possible.