we should encourage young people to compete with other people.

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we should encourage young people to compete with other people.

语法上没有错误,但是感觉很中式英语。
Competition should be encouraged among the young.

We should encourage teenagers to compete with others to improve themselves.
这样会更好些

对的,不过为了避免重复最好把最后两个词改成others

对的,没啥问题