would you please let me know when you have match i will go and watch you play.哪里错了呀?

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would you please let me know when you have match i will go and watch you play.哪里错了呀?

我不知道你这话是自己做的,还是让别人改错
(would you please let me know )when do you have match ?这句话括号里面的是客套的,剩下的是这句话的主体,就很容易分析了
这句话若是我说,我一般会说
would you please tell me when do you have match ?

第二个you 后跟will ,表示将来时

i will go and watch you play 中的应该是playing
watch sb doing.