Qingdao is a beautiful city,there are many people on vacation there.这句话错在哪?

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Qingdao is a beautiful city,there are many people on vacation there.这句话错在哪?

改为there are many people being on vacation

这两句话都是完整的句子,中间不能用逗号隔开,可以在there前加一个and改成并列句。

没错
要算错的的话,第二句there 要大写 :)

there are many people on vacation there,后面的 there 去掉