People won't have access to clean drinking water ,the waste water poured into the river .我想表达的是:污水被倒进河里,人们将无法得到纯净的引用水.(这是用在高三英语作文中的句子,我们老师说独立主格结构不能这样用,可是我觉得没错),请高手指津,

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People won't have access to clean drinking water ,the waste water poured into the river .
我想表达的是:污水被倒进河里,人们将无法得到纯净的引用水.(这是用在高三英语作文中的句子,我们老师说独立主格结构不能这样用,可是我觉得没错),请高手指津,

People won't have access to clean drinking water ,with the waste water being poured into the river