英语翻译But one more has just been added - a communications blackout caused by solar storms.

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英语翻译
But one more has just been added - a communications blackout caused by solar storms.

太阳风只要稍强一点,通讯就会中断。

但更增加了一个由太阳风暴引起的通讯中断.

But one more has just been added - a communications blackout caused by solar storms.
翻译:但这个更增加了一个由太阳风暴造成的通信中断.
下面那个好像是哪个“一”要改成“这”

但一个更增加了一个由太阳风暴造成的通信中断。(好像是被动语态啊..........