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第一次去麦当劳(The First Time to McDonalds)
Yesterday evening, Mother took me to McDonald's for dinner. I was excited, for this was the first time I went there.
Before I ate, the smell of the tasty food made my mouth watering. I had ordered a hamburger, a bag of chips, fried chicken and a cup of coffee.
I quite enjoyed them, and we stayed there for nearly an hour. I really have had a good time, and hope to go there again.

My first time to ride a bike
Today I can ride a bike very well. But three years ago, it was too hard for me to ride a bike. Now I still remember my first time to ride a bike.
I often fell off the bike, but I didn’t stop riding. First I asked my father to help me with my bike. Next, let him not help me and I rode alone. Then I could ride a few minutes. I kept practising. Finally I could ride a bike to school. I was very happy. From this thing, I know nothing in the world is impossible if you set your mind to do it.
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文章介绍了第一次学习自行车的经历,和从学自行车中获得的人生哲理,全文非常流畅,英语知识很扎实,继续努力.

My first time to ride a bikeToday I can ride a bike very well.But three years ago,it was too hard for me to ride a bike.Now I still remember my first time to ride a bike.I often fell off the bike,but ...